The Grey Wizard

I think you did pretty well with this piece. It sounded like James was starting to tear you up for the anatomic incongruencies, but, like you stated, you originally drew this on a 3DS. That think can be trippy when things are placed in layers. It looked like he was really getting enthralled by it though, so you may want to look to him for some future critiques, as it seemed that he was wanting to help you out as well.

Anyways, I like the attention to detail you have here. Plus, doing this all on a 3DS screen sounds like a feat in itself.